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RADIANTBABY'S CREATIVE JOURNAL
Rent Boy, Part 1/1 
22nd-Jun-2008 12:30 am
DW -- ten/donna snow
Title: Rent Boy
Author: radiantbaby
Characters/Pairings: Ten/Donna
Word Count: 793 [in Word]
Genre: PWP
Rating: NC-17, like very
Summary: Donna hires a rent boy on a pleasure planet. It is secretly the Doctor.
Beta: persiflage_1
Disclaimer: All your Doctor Who are belong to us Sadly, I own nothing related to Doctor Who et al. I am just playing around in their sandbox for a bit of fun.
Author Notes: This was written about 2 weeks or so ago for the kinkmeme [sizeofthatthing], but I've decided to post a few of my stories publically and this is one of them. Thanks so much as always to the magnificent persiflage_1 who checked for typos and such from when I'd originally posted it! Any other mistakes are all mine. Feedback is happy-making, so please leave a word or two [even if I am a bit slack in responding, your comments always make my day].



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He (at least Donna thought it was a male) was blurred around the edges, almost more a shadow than a person, but after a few moments (shrugging to herself that while it was an alien, her libido was winning over her thoughts) she no longer cared.

-- It was why she'd called a rent boy after all, she needed a bloody shag. The Doctor had assured her it was perfectly safe, even gave her a number to call for one without any sort of noticeable reaction or judgment. Donna was thankful for that; asking the Doctor how to get laid on the pleasure world they were visiting had been a bit embarrassing. --

He moved into her bed, pulling off her clothing slowly, while his mouth lingered on her breasts. He swirled his tongue around her nipples, sucking on them at intervals, before pulling them each between his teeth to bite. Donna called out, consumed in pleasure and pain, and felt herself grow even more wet. She tried to watch her mystery lover as he licked her, but every time she tried to focus on him, it simply made her head hurt too much. Then, as he pulled a nipple into his mouth and sucked on it while flicking his tongue against it, Donna felt a throb in her clit with each stroke of his tongue, and soon stopped watching as she no longer cared.

He kissed all over her entire body -- lingering in between thighs, behind knees, and across her belly -- before pressing his mouth against the wetness pooling between her legs. He drew his tongue up languidly over her slit, caressing her labia softly with it before pushing it inside her. He thrust his tongue in and out of her, curling it against her vaginal walls causing her to thrash about on the bed. Soon his fingers replaced his tongue -- first one, then two, and then what felt like three -- while his mouth moved up to suckle her clit, sucking it as hard and intensely as he had done with her nipples earlier. Donna was calling out loudly -- cursing, moaning, and groaning -- as his fingers pushed in and out of her with urgency and his mouth held her clit between his lips, his tongue flicking it as he sucked. She worried for a moment about all the noise she was making, worried about people in the nearby rooms hearing her, worried about the Doctor hearing her, but as he curled his fingers to caress her g-spot, causing her to come, she no longer cared.

Donna couldn't believe how good his cock felt as he soon moved within her. He was bigger than any man she had been with before and just about the size of the dildo she'd used so many late nights alone in her room on the TARDIS. His hips moved like a piston against her, moving in circular thrusts that she met counterpoint with her own hips. He moved a pillow beneath her bum, allowing for deeper penetration, and then lifted her legs to rest on his shoulders, pressing his whole body against her as he thrust. Donna could barely speak or think, almost-strangled moans coming from her lips as his hard length pushed deeply inside her and she felt almost as if he was filling her entire body. His fingers found her clit and stroked in time to his near-manic thrusts. For a moment she wondered if she might somehow get pregnant from this being or even some sort of space disease, but as she began to climax again, her lover thrusting so hard against her she knew she'd be sore in the morning, she no longer cared.

Donna's lover had his own climax after what seemed like an hour or so and he was so quiet that she almost wondered if he was even enjoying the sex. She wondered if that was how it was with rent boys -- not showing much pleasure of their own. He soon moved from her and was out the door before she could catch her breath. Donna laid back across the mattress -- the smell of sex filling the air around her and her body deliciously sore. The mattress was slightly wet from the sex and the sweat and usually she would have got up to change the sheets, but she was so exhausted, so satiated, she no longer cared.

Her lover stood outside her door, reaching up to pull off the TARDIS key with a perception filter he'd worn around his neck. He sighed almost sadly, running a hand through his hair as he made his way back to his room. Where Donna was concerned, the Doctor found he cared too much.
Comments 
22nd-Jun-2008 05:11 am (UTC)
That's so sad and sweet at the same time...
22nd-Jun-2008 05:35 am (UTC)
[Here from marriedonmars.]

This is one of my favourites from the kinkmeme; I've read it multiple times, FYI.

But, but, I badly want the Doctor's point of view after the last line! I don't suppose there's any chance you'd ever write his side of it?
22nd-Jun-2008 06:21 am (UTC)
But, but, I badly want the Doctor's point of view after the last line! I don't suppose there's any chance you'd ever write his side of it?

Seconded! I would love to read that!

Marvellous hot fic - it's certainly going straight to my mems! :P

*re-reads happily*
23rd-Jun-2008 06:00 pm (UTC)
Thirded - and a big reveal to prove how wrong he is.
22nd-Jun-2008 06:07 am (UTC)
Ahh! Poor Doctor.
22nd-Jun-2008 07:28 am (UTC)
OMG this was you?

I already appreciated this quite a bit.

If I appreciate it any more, my wrists will be sore.

This is what happened later on, on the planet of Midnight.
22nd-Jun-2008 09:08 am (UTC)
Loved it, poor Dr though!
22nd-Jun-2008 10:34 am (UTC)
Fantastic. Very sweet.
22nd-Jun-2008 02:15 pm (UTC)
*fans self*

Beautifully bittersweet, and very very hot.
23rd-Jun-2008 02:10 am (UTC)
i literally spent my entire day on that kinkmeme since you linked it in your posting to andtheropes.

good lord. ::fans self::

Also, this made me want to give the doctor a big hug. and then have my way with him. and then give him another, bigger hug.
23rd-Jun-2008 03:28 am (UTC)
*gasps in delight* This was you? Oh, this was one of my favourites. It melted my pants, to be frank. And it made me want to comfort the Doctor...*retreats to happy land*
xxx
23rd-Jun-2008 08:19 am (UTC)
Rawr, this is really intense and hot! I only recently started sailing on that Doctor/Donna ship, and this only made me even happier with my choice :p But poor Doctor, I wouldn't mind reading what happened after he went back to the TARDIS, if you want to continue the story, that is! :)
23rd-Jun-2008 08:27 pm (UTC)
Oh! I loved this. So hot, and the last paragraph killed me
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