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Awkward, Part 1/1 
16th-Aug-2008 06:23 am
DW -- ten/jenny embrace
Title: Awkward
Author: radiantbaby
Characters/Pairings: Jenny/Luke Smith [with allusions to Ten/Sarah Jane, Ten/Martha, Ten/River, and Ten/Donna off-camera]
Word Count: 2459 [in Microsoft Word]
Genre: Very smutty PWP
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: The Sarah Jane Adventures [so you know who Luke is] and S4’s The Doctor’s Daughter [so you know who Jenny is]. You don’t need to have seen either to enjoy this though, as there are no actual plot spoilers within.
Summary: First time sex for both Jenny and Luke, can they get past their inexperience and awkwardness to actually enjoy themselves?
Beta: None
Disclaimer: All your Doctor Who are belong to us Sadly, I own nothing related to Doctor Who et al. I am just playing around in their sandbox for a bit of fun.
Author Notes: I’m organizing my hard drive and decided to post several of the fics I’ve written for the kinkmeme publicly – this is the last one. This one in particular was originally written back in July for the prompt “Jenny/Luke Smith, first time for both of them. And possibly there's a risk of someone walking in on them. Also, Luke is at least 18, insofar as he's 14 now.” In this particular fic, Luke is 18. Writing awkward, first-time sex was a bit of a personal challenge, but I still enjoyed it. I didn’t want to err completely on the end of bad-sex per se, so I made it as enjoyable as I could between them both. I do hope that it is convincing in that regard. There is no beta for this fic as it’s been sitting on the net for a while now. I tried to find any typos that I could, but I might have missed some. Oh, and feedback is happy-making, so please leave a word or two [even if I am a bit slack in responding, your comments always make my day].


There was a knock on Luke’s door, startling him. His hand had been furiously working his hard cock, stroking its length to help ease the desires welling within him before the interruption.

“Yes?” he inquired, his voice almost a squeak.

“Can I come in?” a voice quietly asked, muffled by the wood of the door.

It was Jenny.

Jenny was the daughter of the Doctor and was currently traveling all of time and space by his side. Oh, how Luke envied her. Sure, he’d met many aliens over the past four years himself, but he wanted to travel and see what else the universe held out there.

He also had to admit – with a blush and nervous tug in his belly – that he wanted to travel with her as well.

There was so much about Jenny that reminded him of himself, especially when he was younger and first in Sarah Jane’s care. So awkward and naïve, yet so full of curiosity about anything and everything around her, Jenny had only been alive for about a year. Physically she looked no more than nineteen or twenty (at the most), but she had been born fully formed much as he was.

Fully formed and absolutely beautiful, that is. Sometimes he couldn’t help but stare at her, at least until Clyde would nudge him and whisper that he was being rude.

He quickly sat up, pulling on his pajama trousers and covering his lap with his blanket and a pillow, trying to look as relaxed and nonchalant as possible. “Of course.”

Jenny opened the door and entered the room. Luke’s breath hitched for a moment as the moonlight lit up her face and she almost looked ethereal. Beautiful, he mused.

She shut the door quietly and then looked at him with a mischievous grin. “Can you hear them?” she whispered, giggling a bit.

Of course he’d heard “them” – the Doctor and his Mum. Just upstairs you could just faintly make out the moans and cries and the slight knocking of the headboard against the wall. They’d always had sex when the Doctor came to visit and Luke, his hormones in full swing like any young man, always had to “take matters in hand” (so to speak) as a result.

“Yeah, they do that a lot.”

Jenny rushed over and sat on his bed next to him with a bounce – a move that caused her breasts to also bounce against the thin fabric of her vest top. Not that Luke was looking, of course. Or so he tried to convince himself as he moved his line of sight quickly to the wall behind her to distract himself from the sight of hard nipples pressed against fabric so very close to him

“Do they?” she asked excitedly, as if she was being let in on The Biggest Secret in the Universe. Then again, it was new to her. This was the first time the Doctor had spent the night with Jenny around, the first time he’d had any alone time with Mum aside from fighting alien threats and saving the world in quite some time.

“Yes. The Doctor loves her and he makes Mum happy.”

“Is that why she is making those sounds, because she is happy?”

Luke chuckled and shook his head at her naivete, though he felt a twinge in his groin at the way she looked at him, all doe-eyed and her lips slightly parted. “Don’t you know about sex, Jenny?” he asked, the words coming out a bit more hoarse than he would have liked.

“Bits and pieces, I suppose, but that’s just from things I pick up. I know Daddy has sex with people – Donna, Martha, River – but I’ve never really heard so much before. I wouldn’t even know for sure that he was having sex with all those women, but I snuck by his room once when he was with Martha and heard them. Plus, I’ve overheard things he’s said to them all and they sound like things men say on television when they are being…seductive.”

“Well, he is pretty charming. I know that if I were that charming…” Luke began, but stopped himself, not wanting issues with his self-esteem to bring down the conversation.

“Have you…I mean, have you ever had sex?” Jenny asked.

Luke blushed, looking down at the pillow on his lap as he began to play with a loose thread hanging from its stitching. He told himself that he had to remember that she wasn’t being malicious – as the kids in school had so often been toward him regarding his inexperience in all sorts of matters – and that she was just being curious. Like him.

“No,” he said quietly, still unable to look at her.

Jenny reached out and took his hand, the one that was fiddling with the thread. She tugged on it slightly and he looked up at her. “Will you have sex with me, Luke?”

“I…” he began, blinking rapidly at her, completely floored by her question.

“I know I’m probably not as exciting as those girls on the television, but I want to know what it feels like. I want to make noises like them,” she said, gesturing upward to refer to the sex going on upstairs.

“Jenny…trust me, I want to, believe me I want to, but I’ve…I’ve never…”

“Sshh,” Jenny said, putting a finger to his lips, “Neither of us have, but there’s a first time for everything and I think it should be now. So, how do we start?”

“Er, well, we need to get undressed.”

Jenny suddenly grabbed at the blankets and pillow on Luke’s lap and pushed them onto the floor. She paused, staring down with a look of surprise and curiosity. He looked down to follow her gaze and noticed she was staring at his erection, pressed tightly against the fabric of his trousers. “Oh,” she whispered.

Luke moved his hand to cover himself, but Jenny quickly stopped him, holding him by the wrist. Her other hand began to slowly make its way up his thigh. “I’ve never seen one in person,” she cooed, reaching out and tentatively touching his length – bent inside his trousers – with her fingertips, “It’s so hard.”

Luke simply grunted at her touch, already very aroused from masturbating before she came in. She stroked up and down the length of him, tongue darting out of the corner of her mouth as she examined him. “Oh, Jenny…oh God, please…oh no, no, no,” he said with a moan, tensing as his climax suddenly seized him, soiling his trousers.

Jenny rubbed the wet fabric. “What was that?”

“I…I, uh,” he panted, “I had an orgasm.” He was certainly blushing now. Premature ejaculation, great, he groaned to himself.

“Does that mean that we’re done? That we can’t have sex now? I’ve heard that things end after the man orgasms,” Jenny asked with a pout.

“Oh, no, no!” he exclaimed, “I can still have sex. It might take a few minutes, but I’ve certainly got more than one orgasm in me.”

Luke knew he’d be hard again any minute and ready to go. He might not be experienced with sex with a woman, but he was experienced in the way his body worked. In fact, when his Mum’s away for hours at a time, sometimes he would experiment with himself and see how many times he could make himself come in a 24-hour period. He did that a lot, you see – all in the name of science, of course – and so he knew that he could do so now.

“I’ve never had an orgasm,” Jenny said plainly. “Do you know how to give a girl an orgasm too, Luke?”

“I’ve read books?” he offered nervously.

“Well, I want to have one. I want to make those pretty sounds,” she demanded.

“Okay, well, um, let’s get you undressed then.”

Luke helped Jenny with her vest top and then helped her stand up to pull off her knickers and pajama trousers. She was certainly a vision, Luke thought, as she stood next to the bed, nude and bathed in moonlight. He did his best not to stare at her, looking down again.

Jenny reached down and tipped his chin up with her finger, “Look at me, Luke. I like when you look at me.”

Luke stood before her, his eyes roaming over her body, taking in the sights of the curve of her breasts and belly, the muscles in her thighs, and that sweet spot that lay between. “I want to try something,” he said, “Stay right there. You can hold onto my shoulders if you need.”

Luke knelt on the floor, stroking his fingers up her calves, behind her knees, and up the length of her thighs. He enjoyed the soft sighs coming from her as a result and began, thankfully, to feel his cock stirring again. He leaned forward, barely able to see in the half-light of the room, but able enough to see the soft outline of the lips of her sex and how their wetness glistened.

He thought back to all the books on sex education he’d read, as well as the pornographic materials he got from Clyde that he would secretly read. He thought of techniques he’d read about and fantasies that women had shared in said books. His mouth moved forward and before he knew it, he licked tentatively at the wet slit between Jenny’s legs.

Jenny trembled, her hands clasping tightly onto his shoulders. “Ooh, that’s nice,” she whispered.

Luke repeated his action, making sure to also draw his tongue against the hardened nub of her clitoris, having read that was particularly enjoyable for women. He began to lick her over and over, alternating angles and pressures, experimenting with thrusting his tongue inside her as well as suckling her lips and clit.

The more she moaned, the more he kept on, letting both her words – to the left, that’s it, no lower, lower – and her reactions steer him until her trembling increased and suddenly she keened, her body quaking against his mouth and the wetness soaking his tongue and lips.

She had come. Luke had made her come. He felt just a bit smug, but certainly thoroughly aroused at this thought.

“That was…that was…amazing,” Jenny whispered, caressing his hair as he still lightly flicked his tongue against her, not wanting to stop tasting her or pleasuring her.

“Mmm,” was all Luke said in response. Lost in the sensation of her.

“I think I want you inside me now, Luke. Will you put your cock inside me?”

Luke’s groin tightened almost painfully at her words, desire for her throbbing throughout his entire being. He pulled from her and stood up. “Yes,” he breathed, pulling her tightly against him as he kissed her fervently. He moaned a bit against her lips as his hard cock brushed against her belly and her nipples pressed against his chest (enough to feel even through the fabric of his shirt).

Jenny pulled at the hem of his shirt, wrestling it up and over his head as the two of them continued to kiss passionately. Then she pushed roughly at the waistband of his trousers, pushing them down to brush past his cock before they pooled on the floor at his feet. Luke really wanted Jenny, more than anything in the world it seemed, but it surprised him that she almost seemed to feel the same.

Jenny shoved at him, pushing him back to fall on the bed, before crawling on top of him. “I heard that being on top hurts less for your first time,” Jenny said, sitting down on his thighs and trapping his cock between her own. “Is that okay?”

Jenny moved her hips a bit, stroking him intercrurally (“Oxford Style,” as it were) between her thighs. He thrust upward, finding it more and more difficult to control himself. “Nnngh.”

Luke gripped the sheets beside him, writhing against Jenny as her smooth thighs worked him. No wonder the Ancient Greeks liked this so much, he mused.

“Are you ready?” she asked, panting.

“Yes, oh yes,” he moaned.

Jenny shifted, taking his cock into her hand before pressing it against her slick entrance. She eased slowly down on him, seeming to try and get the right angle for penetration. She was so very tight and she gasped as he fully penetrated her.

“Are you okay?” Luke whispered, worried she was in pain.

“Uh…yes, I think…it hurts a bit, is that normal?”

“Yes, from what I understand. It should pass. Otherwise, we can stop.”

“No, no, no. I want this,” Jenny countered, wiggling her hips experimentally against him.

“T-take your time,” Luke stammered as the pleasure of her movement surged through him.

Things were very slow at first, both of them trembling and nervous as their bodies moved against one another, trying different angles and depths to see what one another liked. Jenny was so very tight and as her muscles gripped and pulled at him inside her, Luke knew that he was not going to last much longer.

He tentatively reached out a finger, slipping it between where their bodies met to flick it against Jenny’s clit. “Oooh,” Jenny said with surprised awe, but then began to move faster against him.

Her muscles began tightening more and more and Luke wondered if this is what it felt like to have a girl come with you inside her. She was jerking above him, her breasts bouncing up and down as she rode him, her bottom lip tucked in between her teeth as she tried to keep herself somewhat quiet.

The sight was too much for him. He felt the telltale tightness in his groin and soon began to buck up against her wildly, biting his own lip as his orgasm took him.

He kept flicking his finger against her clit and somewhere in the haze of his climax, he could feel her twitching and writhing against him with her own. “Yes, yes, yes,” she whispered over and over, still moving against his now-softening cock.

Luke heard the door squeak open. “Luke, I’m going to need you to get up early tom – “

It was his Mum, Sarah Jane. He looked over at her, horrified, Jenny still straddling him. “M-mum,” he stammered, feeling even more embarrassed when he saw the Doctor curiously peek over her shoulder.

“Hi, Daddy! Hi, Sarah Jane!” Jenny gleefully said to the two of them, “Luke and I just had sex!”

The Doctor and Sarah Jane just looked at one another, apparently too stunned for any other response. Luke knew that he was certainly going to get “a talk” from his Mum when Jenny and the Doctor left the next day.
16th-Aug-2008 10:45 am (UTC)
This is lovely - especially Jenny's (possibly oblivious) glee at the end... (I say "possibly, 'cos I'm not entirely convinced she doesn't know that what she's just said isn't entirely appropriate...)

I also like the fact that you've got Ten in relationships with Martha, Donna and River as well as Sarah Jane. Seems only right and proper given what an Alien Slutboi Tease he is! :D

And the phrase "all in the name of science" cracks me up no end!

You've captured both of their voices very well too.

ETA. Darn, forgot to say this sentence:

Sure, he’d met many aliens head on over the past four years, but he wanted to travel and see what else the universe held out there.

doesn't entirely make sense - the "head on over" seems extraneous.

Edited at 2008-08-16 10:47 am (UTC)
16th-Aug-2008 11:36 am (UTC)
Jenny certainly seems to have inherited Ten's slutty ways. :)

And here's hoping for a sequel, in which Jenny makes things awkward for everyone:

Jenny: "Oh, Sarah Jane, you must be so proud of how large your son's penis is! You should try it!"

Ten: "Right ... which reminds me, I really should have gotten around to teaching you about incest taboos ..."
17th-Aug-2008 01:23 am (UTC)
Nice, very nice.
I love the fact that Jenny thinks, well doesn't realise what she is saying at the end.

Never seen the SJA so I can't comment much on Luke but you had Jenny perfect.
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